Her Billionaire Daddy by Allison WestMy rating: 3 of 5 stars
Final Score - 3 Stars
This book had such promise ...
The plot line just didn't make sense to me - the entire book desperately needs to combed thru with a fine tuning. The flow was off and I'm sorry, but this didn't feel realistic to me as the reader. The main reason you read a book is to escape and this book has me autocorrecting pages worth of dialogue. that's not an escape, that's becoming an editor.
I liked the relationship between Martin and Samantha, but its lacked creditability in a number of instances.
Please re-edit this book ... and if you need some help, I am available.
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